I did a bit of research into construction roles and edited my story to fit a more realistic construction setting. The basic plot is the same, yet there are a few changes made to the logistics of the story that make it easier to understand.
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We first see an establishing shot of a skyscraper being constructed, cranes moving steel reinforcement bars into place. Upon zooming in, we see a group of workers securing the reinforcement bars to the rest of the structure. They are all busy at work, except one.
The camera zooms out to reveal one individual not working like he should, sleeping on the job instead. The supervisor (indicated with a blue hat) the lazy worker up, and hurries the individual back to work. We see him begin working again, until the supervisor leaves, where he drifts back to sleep.
Time passes, and the rest of the building is erected by day's end. Workers are still adding the final touches as the lead engineer checks the blueprints to make sure everything looks as it should. Suddenly, the ground begins to shake.
The camera zooms in, and we see the rivets the lazy worker somewhat completed popping out.
Everyone currently on the building panics while the lazy worker is fast asleep again, not even noticing the beams under him falling apart. The building collapses, with everyone in it.
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